From assessment to instruction

Based on my time with my student I have been able to gauge his interest in reading and books as well as assess his fluency. My student says he likes to read and write fictional stories including fantasy. For the past few weeks he has been reading the book Star Wars: The Force Unleashed by Sean Williams. He said he enjoys this book because it is just like the video game he plays at home. He also said that he has read this book one other time. He said that this book is between a hard and just right level for him to read. When talking to my student, he does not seem very excited about his story, not excited to share it with me, nor does he seem excited about reading in general.

Based on my assessment of him, here are the things I know. My student reads about 94 words per minute and 86 words correct per minute, which was collected on three different readings. One reading was a one-minute reading of the fictional book he is currently reading.  A second reading was a non-fiction excerpt and a third reading was a fictional story excerpt. Based on his WCPM he is reading between 10-25^th percentiles for his grade according to Hasbrook & Tindal. With this information, they suggest that he needs a fluency-building program and needs to improve his reading by 0.8 words per week.

When I observed my student reading I noticed that he often reads without notice to periods, often repeating the 3^rd through 5^th words in a sentence (this seems to be where he pauses instead). Additionally, when he is reading aloud he is lacking prosody and expression. Based on the data I have, and my observations I see that regarding fluency he lacks speed and expression. His low fluency is also affecting his reading comprehension. When reading, his focus is on word identification and not on comprehension.

In order to focus on comprehension, I asked my student to retell both the non-fiction and fictional story to me after he read. When retelling the story, my student was able to recall more for the fictional story. He recalled fewer details for the non-fiction story. Based on my observation I would assess him differently in these two situations. For retelling of fiction I would say he provides partial retelling (2 points). For retelling of non-fiction I would say he provides a fragmentary retelling (1 point).

Learning Objectives for lesson

Based on my knowledge of my student’s reading comprehension and fluency, I would focus my lesson for him on fluency. I would work on fluency first because I believe it is his lower fluency level that is affecting his comprehension abilities. With this student, I want to specifically work on reading aloud and teaching him to focus on reading with expression and rhythm. I would most likely choose a text that is at an independent level in order to help him feel successful and allow him the opportunity to focus on expression and rhythm without difficult vocabulary getting in his way. Additionally, I would read with him in order to model my reading. Other than this, I am open to any suggestions that anyone may have.

Division

This last week in class we discussed varying aspects of division. From our Fosnot reading I was most interested in the concept of partative and quotative division problems. At first, I seemed confused as to why this would be important for us to know as teachers. After our time in class I have a greater understanding of the difference between the two division contexts and the importance of knowing these as a teacher.

First, it is my understanding that partative division includes the action of “dealing out”. It is in this situation that students generally use trial and error in order to find the answer. One example problem includes: There are 21 cartons of milk and there are three helpers. How many cartons does each helper get? Partative division is often the most challenging for students. In the example above students know that they have three helpers to “deal out” the milk to. Often times the count, “1, 2, 3” to deal out to the three helpers and then start over with the first person and continue the dealing out until all of the items are distributed out.

Quotative division, on the other hand, includes the action of scooping things together in groupings of a certain number with the number of groupings unknown. One example problem includes: If you have 21 cartons of milk and you want each person to get seven, how many people can you give them to? With this quotative division problem, students will start by putting the total into groups of seven.

I have come to realize that understanding the difference between partative and quotative division context is important in order to provide students with varying division problems in the classroom. This will ensure that students know that division is not just sorting into even groups (or dealing out) or the other way around. Additionally, since students often have a harder time with one of the contexts more than the other, it is good to be able to recognize which type of division problems your students need more practice in.

Finally, when working with division in the classroom I think it is important to make math tangible and accessible by using real life numbers. For example, using food such as candy bars or drinks can become a great entry point for students, which in turn makes division more engaging. 

Project #1 Reflection

Thank you Tristen, Jocelyn and Kristen for your feedback on my analysis of Adam’s writing and the lesson I created for him. You brought up some interesting questions that I had either not considered or I did consider them and forgot to explicitly include them in my write up.

I think we all agreed on my assessment of Adam’s writing based on the examples I shared and the short discussion we had in class. Kristen, you bring up a great question about whether or not Adam’s teacher knows that he has a desire to create his own comics. To answer this, I am not sure but I will surely notify his teacher in any final letter we write to him. Tristen also made a good point that I had not considered in my analysis. If Adam prefers to write comics, then this may be why his essay included back and forth dialog, something often found in comics. In the case of comics, pictures are often the source of greater details. This was a great connection! Based on all of your feedback, I think my assessment was fairly accurate for Adam’s writing based on the writing sample I received. Therefore, there is nothing more that I would add or change at this time.

As for my lesson plan, you all raised some great questions. First, I would like to clarify what I know about voice and point of view/perspective because I know at least Jocelyn was interested in the difference. From what I know, each piece of writing is created from at least one point of view, in the eyes of a character or narrator. Voice is how once specific point of view is communicated consistently to the reader in order to determine the difference between and to learn more about different characters. Additionally it is created to be as if the character is speaking directly to the reader. Elements learned about a character through their “voice” are not always explicitly shared through their point of view. Since point of view usually comes more naturally to a writer, and since the focus on voice also adds details, I chose to focus on this for Adam.

Jocelyn also asked if I would be “addressing what types of words those are that reflect a character's age, personality, and point of view”, and I did plan on this in my lesson. On day 2 of my lesson I stated “Questions to raise: Does all writing have a voice? How does sentence length vary from character to character? Sentence structure? Word choice? Word order, etc.?” In this conversation I would be ready with examples including how longer sophisticated sentences might demonstrate an older and more educated character. Whereas shorter sentences with less sophisticated words, maybe using slang, may demonstrate a younger or teenage character. I would provide the small group with other examples that would also allow the students to focus on what they saw/heard demonstrated in the Voices in The Park story (and me not just telling them). It is in this discussion that we will call upon word choice, also asked by Jocelyn.

A second piece I would like to add or clarify in my lesson is the inclusion of the optimal learning model, as described in Routman and as suggested by Jocelyn. I thought through the model as I created the lesson although I did not explicitly call it out. On day one of my lesson the focus is on shared reading as we read Voices in The Park; this shared demonstration according to Routman. Routman says this can be used to demonstrate and discuss “the author’s craft (figures of speech, leads, endings)”, which I think would include the idea of voice. For this day Jocelyn asks how I would model for the students how to find textual support to back up their claims about a character’s personality. In doing this, I would be providing examples on the character that I chose to explore. I note this in my lesson by saying I would “think aloud to demonstrate how to use the chart with the first voice”. I see that I could have been more explicit here. I think this aspect of the lesson, when students begin searching the text on their own, would be guided practice since students are primarily doing the work and I am there for support if needed. Throughout the rest of the lesson, responsibility sifts back and forth between teacher and student. Teacher shows students how to do something by demonstrates, does it with the students, and then asks them to do it by themselves.

A final piece that I would like to add to my lesson plan would be to ask the students to take risks in their writing by including “personal details that reveal the person behind the words” as suggested in the Six Trait Assessment and as pointed out by both Kristen and Tristen. This is an excellent addition to the lesson and I think this could make the writing piece more meaningful to the small group.

Analysis of Student Writing and Lesson Plan

Analysis

Meaning of the piece

In his piece titled “The Pualup Fair”, Adam is writing in response to a prompt asking him to write about the best day of his life. There was obviously more time and purpose put into this piece of writing (more so than the other pieces he shared) and it is clear that this was a very important day to Adam. Prior to writing the four-paragraph essay, he used a graphic organizer to aid him in developing his story. This graphic organizer can be found on the first page attached to his essay. Adam explains this day with excitement, saying the dragon tattoo he got was “slick” and explains his attempt at a basketball shoot out as, “It was in the air! And…MISS!” Most importantly to Adam, he shared a few details about his very first concert, which he attended this same day. “Everyone was loud when it started. The first guitar sting being plucked.”

6 Traits Assessment

In Adam’s writing sample, he writes about a topic that is narrow and manageable, writing about a single most favored day. While he is able to pick out three aspects of his day that were most important to him, there are some details lacking to support these main ideas. For example, Adam writes about his first experience at a concert and says, “It was great! The most fun I have ever had.” Although, he does not share further supporting details behind these statements and therefore the reader does not know why the concert was so great. On the other hand, when sharing his other two favored aspects of the day (his dragon tattoo and basketball shoot out) he gives almost too many details. Adam notes word for word the conversations that were exchanged but does not share his thoughts or feelings about these experiences.

Looking at the organization of Adam’s writing, he draws the reader in from the start by saying, “It was 2009 and I was very excited.” He closes his writing by answering a question he raised in his opening paragraph, bringing the piece full circle but still leaving the reader with a desire for more explanation. The sequencing of his writing makes sense as the story is written in sequential order of the days’ events. Transitions, on the other hand, are sometimes unclear as to how the story jumped from one place to the next. The pacing of the writing is also somewhat uneven; sometimes he goes into too many details that do not relevant and does not move on, and other times more details are needed for the reader’s understanding (as described above when talking about ideas).

In relation to voice, Adam does not use many personal details to describe his day at the fair. Instead he relies on the added dialog between himself and the other people in his story. The dialog lacks details and is constantly back and forth. For example he writes, “‘Which one of you wants to go first?’ he asked. ‘Me’ I said. ‘What is your name?’ he asked. ‘Adam’ I said.” Adam’s feelings and thoughts are often missing in his story and are only present in his opening and closing paragraphs. It is almost as if his supporting paragraphs are simply a retelling of a day without the main character’s internal thoughts. There is purpose in his writing but it is not compelling.

Adam rarely attempts to use descriptive words in his writing; descriptors are only in the opening and closing paragraphs and the first sentence of his first supporting paragraph. It says, “After the augsausting (exhausting) ride, we finally got to the fair.” After this, adjectives and adverbs are missing from his writing, leaving the language dull. Adam sticks to basic and familiar words to communicate. Although the language is not exciting, the words do support the meaning.

Most of this piece does not invite expressive oral reading, as there is little cue for the reader to know the feeling behind the text. Dialog is strictly back and forth and feeling is lacking. Not all sentences begin the same way; therefore, there is variety in the structure and length of his sentences. Incomplete sentences leave the reader looking for clues in surrounding sentences to understand meaning. For example Adam writes, “Excited for one reason and one reason only.” Who is excited? Additionally he writes, “And will never forget it.” Forget what? Who will never forget? Although his sentences do not seem artfully put together, the piece as a whole does contain meaning.

Adam’s spelling is usually correct, and when it is not correct it is usually phonetically correct. For example he titles this story “The Pualup Fair” instead of “The Puyallup Fair”. This was a great attempt for a difficult word! Sentences usually begin with capital letters. There are some errors found in his ending punctuation; this is mostly seen with his use of dialog. For example he writes, “‘Hello boys!’. he said.” Here he adds an additional unnecessary period after the quote. Errors in grammar are not frequent, and when they are present they do not distort meaning. The use of paragraphing is present. Although, he combined his last main idea and the closing paragraph together, where he should have added another paragraph for his closing.

Ownership

Adam shared with me that he enjoys writing. When he is writing on his own he prefers to write and illustrate his own comics and fictional stories. In school, Adam prefers assignments that allow him to write about his own life. When asked about his writing abilities, Adam said,  “I am a pretty good writer but I don’t think I have good handwriting.” From his description of himself, and after reading his writing, it seems as if he would enjoy the freedom to write more creative pieces when he is not being judged or graded. When he has to write for an assignment he seems to prefer to write or simply retell a personal experience, not having to think outside the box for further creativity.

Spelling

According to the spelling inventory I gave Adam, and according to Bear et. al., Adam would fall in the middle intermediate to early advanced reading and writing stages. Given the words he spelled incorrectly, he needs more practice on syllables and affixes as well as derivational relations. For example, when attempting to spell “opposition”, he wrote “opposion”. This at tells me that he was unaware of the syllables present and the appropriate affix for this word stem. Similar patterns are seen in the other words he spelled incorrectly like “celler” and “confidend”.

Lesson Plan

Rationale

I have chosen a small group lesson that teaches the concept of voice in writing. A specific voice is missing in Adam’s writing, as seen in the assessment of voice in his writing above. With an improvement in voice, I believe Adam will also be motivated to improve his word choice and become more intentional about his sentence structure. Additionally, Adam enjoys writing fiction at home so I wanted to give him an opportunity to do so (with some structure) at school. Finally, the concept of voice is something that most sixth grade students need to develop, which would make this a great small group lesson. The lesson is a three part lesson because voice is hard to teach in one block period.

Objectives

1.     Students will be able to understand voice and how it is created in a piece of writing.

2.     Students will be able to create a piece of writing that incorporates strategies that demonstrate an understanding of voice in writing.

Standard(s)

EALR 3.2.1 Applies understanding that different audiences and purposes affect writer’s voice.

Writes in a characters voice (e.g., retells a story using the point of view and voice of a

character in the story; explains a historic event in the voice of a participant in that event).

Assessment

1.     Teacher will assess students’ understanding of voice and how it is created in a piece of writing by listening to group discussion and listening for accurate connections between voice and how it is demonstrated in a piece of writing.

2.     Teacher will assess student’s ability to create a piece of writing that incorporates strategies that demonstrate an understanding of voice in writing by looking at the student’s piece of writing and looking for carefully chosen and arranged words that clearly reflect the character’s age, personality and point of view. Teacher will also look for sentence length and structure that is varied in such a way that all sentences connect naturally to the character.

Materials

3-6 copies of Voices in the Park by Anthony Browne

7 copies of the Character Analysis Chart (Attached)

Writer’s Notebooks (For student brainstorming and first drafts)

Instructional Strategies

DAY 1

Begin the lesson by doing a shared reading (Routman, 2003, Ch.9) of Voices in the Park by Anthony Browne with the small group. After reading the book, begin a discussion about voice in writing by calling attention to the four voices in this story. Make sure to talk about why voice is important in writing, who the voice in a piece of writing usually represents (the writer), what voice does (gives one point of view), and how it is used (to show a particular set of attitudes that allow the reader to hear the words spoken in their head). Then, discuss the facts in the story – the things that stay the same from character to character. 

Assign one voice from the story to each student in the group and pair them up with another student with the same assigned voice. Hand out the Character Analysis Chart and think aloud to demonstrate how to use the chart with the first voice. Students will use the text and pictures to determine facts and personality traits about their assigned character. Encourage students to find multiple supports for each of their claims; emphasizing that textual support is needed. The teacher will check in with each pair to see if they are all able to be successful with the assignment or if they need additional guidance. This would be considered guided practice as described by Routman.

After each pair is done, the teacher will have students share out their ideas with the whole group.

The teacher will focus the discussion on each character’s personality and supporting assertions with evidence from both the text and the illustrations.

DAY 2

Recall the previous day’s lesson on voice with the small group students. Then, begin the discussion on how voice is written into a story or essay by looking at strategies that Browne used in Voices in the Park. Questions to raise: Does all writing have a voice? How does sentence length vary from character to character? Sentence structure? Word choice? Word order, etc.?

As a group, brainstorm situations in which there may be more than one point of view. For each situation, include a list of the various “voices” that may be involved. For example, an argument out on the playground could include the bully, the victim, the recess guard and the principal.

As a group, decide on one situation that the group will write a story for. Have students list the “facts” of the story—what will definitely happen regardless of whom is telling the story. Students will choose one of the possible voices and, in their writer’s notebooks, brainstorm how they will make their character’s voice clear. 

DAY 3

Students will spend time writing their part of the story. When completed, students will assist each other in revisions to improve the voice of the character in their writing. When writing is complete, students will read their pieces to the group to show the “complete” story of the chosen situation written from all points of view. Students will celebrate their writing, as suggested in Routman (Routman, 2005, Ch.2).

Reference:

Lesson adapted from National Council of Teachers of English. Teaching Voice with Anthony Browne’s Voices in the Park. Found at http://www.readwritethink.org/classroom-resources/lesson-plans/teaching-voice-with-anthony-167.html?tab=1#tabs.

Google docs

I am fascinated by the functionality offered in Google docs. Google docs can be used by anyone with access to the internet. With a google account you can create and share documents, spreadsheets, presentations, forms, drawings and even whole folders. A google account holder can also post previously created documents and save on Google docs to share with anyone they desire.

When I used this website I chose to post an excel spreadsheet that I created on my MacBook (both Mac and PC are compatible with Google docs). The spreadsheet I created combined all of the homework, readings and assignments I have due in all of my classes combined during this Winter quarter. I set the privacy settings to allow only people who I emailed the document link to access the document. These people were also able to make changes to the document if they desired. This project took me 4+ hours since it was very complicated to combine different layouts into one. I allowed my whole cohort to access my document and make changes. Since then, a few people have made changes to the document. Although, this does not go to say that using Google docs should be challenging to new technology users. The document in its most current form can be found here: My Google doc.

I really enjoyed the translation function available within an individual document. I see this being very useful for sending home letters to parents in multiple languages or even if trying to email a parent who speaks another language. I have been told that the translation function is fairly accurate. Additional helpful capabilities of this site are the chat function and the real-time changes. For example, if I have a document open and one of my peers has the same document open, we can chat about the document and make real-time changes to the document for each of us to see. This can be very helpful when collaborating with others on work. This would be great for students who are working on a project together and will allow them to work over the internet instead of meeting face to face, if that is a challenge.

What Mathematics Education should be

I have heard people say that math plays no role in the world besides its presence in the school classroom. While I very much disagree with this statement, as I am sure many people do, I think the main problem is not with the person but with their experience of mathematics education. Mathematics education, like all other education, is a part of a swinging pendulum where reform and new theories take teaching in one direction and then later in another. In the past, I believe the focus of elementary mathematics education was simply for students to learn the steps necessary to solve given problems and memorize a set of math facts. This type of education allowed little freedom in thinking and exploration. This type of education has misled many people to think that math is separate from the real world and has planted within them the idea that you will rarely use any math you learn in school.

Today, the pendulum has swung the opposite way. Now the idea is to enable students to mathematize their worlds, to find meaning and understanding from a mathematical approach. Teachers are encouraged to  allowing students to discover math, much like they discover science, and then share their ideas and their thinking with the rest of the class.  No longer is there a goal to open children's brains and plant the necessary information, instead there should be freedom in allowing students to make their own discoveries. Through this type of exploration, and according to Fosnot and Dolk, teachers must give students context in their exploration. In addition, the context of the assignments must be open enough to allow for individual development. It is all very exciting to read about "new" ideas for mathematics education. I am eager to learn more and incorporate these ideas in my own class.

Opening the unused cart of new Mac laptops

This week I got permission from my main placement to both teach the math lesson AND "crack" open the dusty yet brand new mac laptops for the students to use. Since I use a mac myself, I was very comfortable in getting them out and setting them up for each of the 25 students. I was not even the least bot fearful to lead a lesson where 25 second graders were playing on laptops for the first time! It was an awesome experience! I was even able to teach the students how to use the laptops AND the lesson specifically. The kids loved me right away because I provided them with a much more engaging spelling lesson than they are used to. Plus, the students were actually learning. One student said to me "I am addicted. I am going to do this at home now too." Awesome!

So here is what I did: I observed a intermediate teacher work on this website called SpellingCity with his students and I decided this would be great for my second graders. The website allows a teacher, for free, to enter in and save all of his/her weekly spelling words. Students go to the site, from school or at home, search the teacher's name and find the appropriate spelling list for that week. Then, students are presented with numerous interactive games where students can practice their spelling words. Some of the games include a word search, crossword with vocabulary, match it sentences, hang mouse, and audio word match. There were three additional aspects of this type of "practice" lesson that I really appreciated. First, the games game immediate feedback about whether or not the students were choosing the right word or spelling it correctly. Often times in classrooms there are many areas where elementary students do not get feedback about how they are doing so they do not know if they need to change something they are doing. I really enjoyed this aspect. Second, I felt as though this lesson was differentiated. Students were allowed to select their own games to play; some games were much challenging than others. Students who I knew needed a greater challenge ended up on the more difficult games and vice versa. Lastly, I felt that a interactive lesson like this, one with instant verbal and visual directions, questions and feedback was more accessible to the ELL students in the class. These students were enjoying the lesson as much as the rest of the class and were actually helping explain how to play some games to other students in the class.

I loved this lesson involving technology and I am excited to use these computers on a more regular basis!